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    Zenadus - The Viper Clan -

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    - The Viper Clan -
    In the deep caverns beneath the great lake, the moister and the smell of death reveals itself when you move around the lake to the dark opening. You can hear the sound of something sliding across the floor and the voice of a mysterious people; you step into the light of the fire as a young man is standing with his snake like eyes focused on the dancing silhouettes on the floor.

    Tylor: “Hey Brock… where have you been…”

    Brock: “Oh I have been out hunting…”

    As the two brothers were speaking, a giant venomous snake came slithering towards them with a wounded body in its mouth, the snake threw the body in front of Tylor before moving over towards the snake pit.

    Tylor: “What have you done now…”

    Brock: “Oh… not much… that person tried to kill me…”

    Tylor: “… of course he did… that’s a warrior from the Peacock you idiot…”

    Brock: “Yea I know that… it’s time to take charge brother…”

    Tylor: “You have defied both our leaders’ orders and the alliance between our two clans… I will have to report you…”

    Brock: “If you try to do so… I will kill you!!!”

    Tylor started walked towards the entrance to the chambers of their master, while staying sharp listening for any movement, as Brock got so enraged that his own brother would turn against him. Brock quickly looked at his own pet snake which immediately slithered across the floor in silence and twisted itself around Tylors’ legs, and as soon as he felt the snake on his body, he jumped into the air spinning while using all his strength to force the snake to let go of him, but to no avail.

    Tylor called for his pet snake to join in the fight, Brock quickly dashed forward at Tylor revealing his teeth as he jumped towards him spinning in the air with both arms held in front of him, making him look like a snake as he smashed both his arms into Tylors’ shoulders, he screamed in pain as Brocks’ nails impaled his skin.

    Brock: “You’re going to die!!!”

    Tylor looked up at his own brother as blood began to flow from his shoulders and the snake stopped holding his legs, and as soon as the snake let go, he felt the snake was beginning to swallow his legs whole.

    Tylor: “Why are you doing this!!!”

    Brock: “Because you betrayed me!!!”

    As soon as he said those words a giant white snake appeared in front of Brock, as Brock was about to look up the snake moved its head towards him in one swift movement biting his neck, simultaneously smashing him into his own snake.

    Master: “What’s going on here!!!”

    Tylor: “Dad!!! He tried to kill me!!!”

    Brock: “So what!! You’re just an idiot… and so are you!!!”

    Their father, the master stood between them, while one of sons were about to die for the lack of blood and the other would be paralyzed temporarily. He walked over to Brock and sat down beside him before looking over at Tylor.

    Master: “Tylor… you’re weak and if you can’t even match your little brother, you’re not worth fighting for…”

    The mighty master of the viper clan did not care for his son, he let him die on the floor while the snakes began to feast on his body, he left to the halls of the elders with his other son Brock, to see to their plans concerning the future.


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    Note: I have writers block, and this chapter is a little short compared to the others but I hope you will enjoy it.
     
         

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    Re: Zenadus - The Viper Clan -

    nice i love your stories
     
         

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    Re: Zenadus - The Viper Clan -

    you do....
     
         

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    Re: Zenadus - The Viper Clan -

    Very Interesting & Different plus rep
     
         

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    Re: Zenadus - The Viper Clan -

    thanks serena though it is not my best chapter :D
     
         

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