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    The Amazing Adventures Of Kotetsu & Izumo: Chapter THREE

    The Amazing Adventures of Kotetsu & Izumo

    Chapter 3: Light

    [Review on last chapter]

    Izumo opens up using a jutsu in combination with Kotetsu to clear/attack the opposers

    Several of the enemies appear dead and after sending a message to the Mizukage headquarters they resume their search

    Again they’re attacked this time by the opposers’ allies and a brawl between the two parties commence

    Godaime Mizukage intercepts and restores order by executing the uncooperative enemy

    Mei offers her assistance in recovering the item



    Note: I want to apologize for the unfortunate late release as I would have posted sooner but I had too many things going on at once and simply was unable. I will be releasing 4 sooner than the usual week in between in an attempt to make up for this gap -_-


    Kotetsu: Really?!

    Izumo: *Sigh*

    Mei: Yes *giggle*

    Kotetsu: But how did yo-

    Mei: You mean know what she wants? Well I guessed-I don't know what it is exactly but I know that it is something..like an object for example-I think an item that is hidden would have to be somewhere I don't know..naked to the eye. I'm thinking somewhere like the most obscured. However, the night is upon us and it will be impossible to search at this time-we can resume in the morning..

    Kotetsu: Thank you!

    Narrator: His heart racing, he couldn’t help his aroused tone of voice.

    Izumo: *Sigh*..Thank you for your hospitality

    Mei: Its my pleasure..

    Kotetsu: (In thought) She makes me feel like I cannot control my impulses!

    Narrator: Accepting her offer, she then leads them to a small vacant home.

    Mei: Make yourselves at home and inform me when you’re ready..

    Kotetsu: Yes Mizukage-sama!

    Mei: *Giggle* Good night-

    Kotetsu: Goodnight!

    Narrator: An annoyed Izumo began to settle in and viewed only one bed.

    Izumo: Hey love sick puppy!-There is only one bed..

    Kotetsu: Eh!!!-Rock papper scizzors!

    Narrator: Rock is first thrown by both as one then chooses rock and the other scizzors.

    Kotetsu: Shit!

    Izumo: So you couldn’t focus because you had the Mizukage on your mind..

    Kotetsu: Shut up!

    Izumo: Good luck on the floor..*chuckle*

    Narrator: In a matter of minutes; Izumo fell fast asleep but Kotetsu had a tough time finding his sleep due to the hard floor even though he laid on a mat. He eventually succumbed to his fatigue of the long day.

    Izumo: Kotetsu!-Wake up!

    Kotetsu: Huh..ahh-my neck!

    Mei: I apologize for the sleeping arrangements..

    Kotetsu: (In thought) Mei-sama..oh no!!!!!

    Narrator: His eyes largely widened as he quickly wiped off the drool in which had ran from his mouth along the other side of his cheek and he turned his face from her in shame as he got up.

    Kotetsu: Why are you-

    Mei: Izumo-san had already awoken and alerted me

    Kotetsu: (In thought) Why you!

    Mei: You get dressed..freshen up and meet us at my headquarters-its the biggest building here..you can’t miss it..

    Kotetsu: Of course Mizukage-sama

    Narrator: As they exited, an image of Kotetsu ringing Izumo’s neck entered the half awaken cramped shinobi’s mind as he raced to gather himself. By the time he arrives, the sight of his partner and the Mizukage laughing with each other and looking out into the sunrise invoked a mixture of anger, jealousy and nausea.

    Kotetsu: (In thought) Damn you!

    Izumo: Kotetsu!-That was fairly quick compared to how you-

    Kotetsu: (Shouting) Shut up!

    Mei: Oh!

    Kotetsu: I apologize-its just the pain in my neck-

    Mei: No..no need to-just follow me!

    Narrator: They proceeded behind her as Izumo pulled out the special fragment once more in preparation.

    Mei: Isn't the scenery beautiful?

    Kotetsu: Very-

    Mei: *Giggles*

    Kotetsu: (In thought) Actually these surroundings appear eerie and it feels chilly..

    Narrator: They pass through the usual misty air and various fields and hills soaked in dew before reaching a location containing the most mist which wasn't far off from the high mountains.

    Mei: Here..I think it may be somewhere around this area...

    Izumo: Your right!

    Narrator: The special jade-colored fragment began to rise and glow indicating another gem's whereabouts. Suddenly a small geyser spouts from underneath the wet land illuminated by a bright blue light.

    Kotetsu: There it is

    Izumo: Finally

    Mei: Its pretty..

    Narrator: As the fragment reacted heavily, the sapphire-like colored gem rose to the top of the geyser and Kotetsu moved in to recover it.

    Mei: Well I wonder what might that be for..

    Kotetsu: We-

    Mei: I understand-I shouldn't even be here..

    Kotetsu: Its okay-you even helped us to locate it faster..

    Mei: Thank you for allowing me to assist you..oh! I will quickly arrange the boat ride back to...

    Izumo: Kaminari no Kuni

    Kaminari no Kuni Translation
    [Land of Thunder]


    Mei: Oh so this is much bigger than I initially realized?

    Izumo: Yes

    Mei: I see..well this was fun-you two just wait at the coast and good luck

    Izumo: Understood and thank you again..

    Mei: You’re welcome

    Narrator: She heads out towards her headquarters as the Konoha pair set out for the pier.

    Kotetsu: It pains me to have to leave her..

    Izumo: Please..whenever you see another cute female you’ll just revert back to lusting again

    Kotetsu: Hmm!

    Narrator: They eventually arrive at the pier and await for the boat operator. Several moments pass and the boat can be seen.

    Izumo: Look!-The boat’s in view!

    Narrator: As they enter the boat Kotetsu went into a trance of Mei images before Izumo called out to him.

    Izumo: Oi!

    Kotetsu: Sorry.....ah..I wonder what awaits us at the rebelling Thunder

    Izumo: I'm sure that Tsunade-sama must've had trouble clearing us through-

    Kotetsu: Nothing less would be expected..

    Izumo: We need to put our differences behind us if we're to complete the mission there-

    Kotetsu: I understand..

    Boat Operator: There is a storm brewing up ahead..

    Kotetsu: I can barely see that far ahead-

    *Eyes squinting*

    Kotetsu: Oh that does seem bad-

    Boat Operator: Braise yourselves as we may have trouble..

    Kotetsu: Oh shit!

    Narrator: Dark gray-colored swirling thunderclouds surround the coastline. Izumo then stands up and prepares for a jutsu.

    Boat Operator: No need..

    Izumo: Why?-

    Boat Operator: Ranton: Kagayaku Joubu no jutsu!

    [Jutsu Insight]
    Name: Ranton: Kagayaku Joubu no jutsu (Storm Release: Shining Surface Technique)
    Classification: Ninjutsu
    Type:
    Class: Defensive
    Range: Short range
    Hand seals: -
    Description: A luminous canopy-like covering materializes over the user offering protection from enemy attacks, etc. The defensive capabilities rely on the user's chakra input.


    Kotetsu: Thanks-

    Boat Operator: I wouldn't be able to get anyone across if I wasn't able to protect the vessel in which to complete the process..

    Narrator: Violent thundering clouds can be seen as they drew nearer. Bright lightning stroke throughout the monstrous clouds and the powerful bolts that crashed down upon the ocean. A bolt of lightning strikes the roof-like jutsu before being canceled out.

    Izumo: Impressive..

    Narrator: Powerful waves proceeded to crash into their boat however due to the operator’s experience; they were able to overcome it and before long, arrive to Kaminari no Kuni. Upon departing, Izumo quickly exchanges words with Kotetsu.

    Izumo: Nightfall won’t be too far off therefore we don’t have much time to search-we must also be alerted at all times as these shinobi are ruthless..

    Kotetsu: I know-

    Izumo: Lets get a move on!

    Narrator: Izumo pulls out the special gem and so begins their long descend into the vast mountainous land.

    Izumo: We’ve been searching for about an hour or so and nothing-

    Kotetsu: And its practically night

    Izumo: *Sigh* There’s no helping it-lets set up camp

    Kotetsu: Right!

    Narrator: The pair pick a spot next to some mountains and prepare themselves for the night. The next morning Izumo has already awoken and after gathering his belongings; he began to wake his partner.

    Izumo: Kotetsu-wake up!

    Kotetsu: Uh..I hate waking up early..

    Izumo: Lets go!

    Kotetsu: Yes-yes..

    Narrator: As Kotetsu began preparing himself, Izumo pulled out the special gem and quickly surveyed the land once again. Once his partner was ready, they then ventured out. As they paced through the land, the landscape gradually became valley-like consisting of an elongated depression between hills of mountains surrounded in clouds.

    Kotetsu: This land is like a maze..

    Izumo: Seems like we're approaching something!

    Narrator: Unaware, the two headed towards the location of Unraikyou.

    Unraikyou Translation
    [This is the translation I’ve come across-Valley of Clouds and Lightning However, through my own research looking up each kanji individually I deduced it to Cloud Thunder Gorge and it is what feels more right in my opinion]


    To be Continued...next chapter entitled "Crack"


    Note: Please don't hesitate to rate, comment and or rep as it is always welcomed ^.^


    Directory:
    The Amazing Adventures Of Kotetsu & Izumo: Chapter ONE
    The Amazing Adventures Of Kotetsu & Izumo: Chapter TWO
    The Amazing Adventures Of Kotetsu & Izumo: Chapter FOUR
     
         
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    Re: The Amazing Adventures Of Kotetsu & Izumo: Chapter THREE

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    Re: The Amazing Adventures Of Kotetsu & Izumo: Chapter THREE

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    Re: The Amazing Adventures Of Kotetsu & Izumo: Chapter THREE

    wow so awsome. I can't wait for the next chapter
     
         

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    Re: The Amazing Adventures Of Kotetsu & Izumo: Chapter THREE

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    Kotetsu: Uh..I hate waking up early..
    Eh, who doesn't.

    Anyway, nice work from your part again.
     
         

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    Re: The Amazing Adventures Of Kotetsu & Izumo: Chapter THREE

    Quote Originally Posted by uzumaki antonia View Post
    wow so awsome. I can't wait for the next chapter
    Thanks and it will be released in less than a week which is my way of making it up to everyone for the delay of chapter 3

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    Eh, who doesn't.

    Anyway, nice work from your part again.
    lol
    Thank you again and I just noticed we both like Black ★ Rock Shooter! ^.^
     
         

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    Re: The Amazing Adventures Of Kotetsu & Izumo: Chapter THREE

    wow, cool chapter
    Hope more chappys to come!
     
         

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    Re: The Amazing Adventures Of Kotetsu & Izumo: Chapter THREE

    well done once again nice chapter i can wait till the next Chapter let me know once again when u have released the next on 10/10 plus rep keep up the good work.
     
         

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    Re: The Amazing Adventures Of Kotetsu & Izumo: Chapter THREE

    Good job, as always!
     
         

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    Re: The Amazing Adventures Of Kotetsu & Izumo: Chapter THREE

    Kotetsu's Lust-ful Antics Are Thoroughly Humorous, . As Expected, Another Spectacular Performance On Your Part. Hopefully There's Some New Jutsu In The Next Chapter, I Enjoy Your Insight In Terms Of Creating Them.
     
         

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    Re: The Amazing Adventures Of Kotetsu & Izumo: Chapter THREE

    Quote Originally Posted by Maina Deah View Post
    wow, cool chapter
    Hope more chappys to come!
    Thank you are there definitely will be lol

    Quote Originally Posted by serenaandrosie View Post
    well done once again nice chapter i can wait till the next Chapter let me know once again when u have released the next on 10/10 plus rep keep up the good work.
    Thank you for the compliments-it means a lot and I surely will

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    Good job, as always!
    Thank you ^.^

    Quote Originally Posted by Sasuk3Uchiha View Post
    Kotetsu's Lust-ful Antics Are Thoroughly Humorous, . As Expected, Another Spectacular Performance On Your Part. Hopefully There's Some New Jutsu In The Next Chapter, I Enjoy Your Insight In Terms Of Creating Them.
    Yes-I thoroughly enjoy when I emphasis on Kotetsu's passionate desires Thank you and don't fret as battle scenes happen to be my most favorite segment. Thank you again and I can't wait for insight next time!
     
         

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    Re: The Amazing Adventures Of Kotetsu & Izumo: Chapter THREE

    kotetsu is completely mad around mei its funny
     
         

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    Re: The Amazing Adventures Of Kotetsu & Izumo: Chapter THREE

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    kotetsu is completely mad around mei its funny
    Yes he is and it is the highlight of the chapter for me

    Thanks for reading
     
         

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    Re: The Amazing Adventures Of Kotetsu & Izumo: Chapter THREE

    hello iread it now
    thanks..
     
         

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    Re: The Amazing Adventures Of Kotetsu & Izumo: Chapter THREE

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    hello iread it now
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    Your welcome lol
     
         

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